How i improved my draft Piece - L2

Carrying on from my first lesson i decided to change my contents page. The main issue people had was the mass of green smoke behind the articles. I therefore went for a more calm and subtle approach and by mixing black into the blue it makes it look a bit darker which may appeal to the rockier side of the magazine audience. I also decided to change the page numbers and size of the page numbers, this makes my magazine seem like a real magazine with the quantity of articles inside.