How i improved my draft Piece - L1

For this first lesson i decided to get the more important changes out of the way, so decided to first go with the change in colour scheme. After experimenting with different colours, i went for a dark blue colour to substitute my green colour that i used in my draft design. This is a lot less striking and may make the magazine look a little more appealing. I also decided to layer the splat on my title behind the title now. It makes for a lot more subtle look to the splat and makes the feel a bit more music magazine like.